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Title of lead:
Startling statement
Definition:
A startling statement creates drama. It startles readers as they didn’t expect to read something as shocking as this sentence. It makes the reader confused but also makes them entertained to want to read more.
Created lead:
It’s not their fault they were born this way.
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In this blog I'm going to talk about another type of lead that could help me improve my writing.
Title of lead:
Twist
Definition:
A Twist sets a reader for one mood and then this is changed. It's meant to surprise the reader. This leads them astray and they don't know what to expect.
The Factsheet Paragraph:
“An armored truck was traveling down Orange Avenue during this morning's rush hour. The truck hit a particularly bad pothole, and the backdoor of the vehicle flew open. The truck contained approximately $20,000 in change the city had collected from is parking meters. The money fell to the pavement.Several bags burst open. Police halted traffic. City workers summoned to the scene used brooms to sweep up the coins, then shoveled them back into the truck. But, before the police and other city employees arrived at the scene, dozens of other motorists and bystanders stopped at the scene. Some offered to help. When city officials later counted the money retrieved by the workers, they found they had exactly $18,482.17. The remainder seems to have been stolen.”
Created lead:
Citizens of Orange Avenue got a surprise when coins were raining, but it wasn’t from the sky.
That's all for todays blog, on the next I'll talk about another interesting type of lead!
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In todays class we learned about different leads so now I'm going to practice how to write some. This is going to help me write an interesting article for my magazine.
Title of lead:
Direct quote
Definition:
Direct quote leads are when the words of someone else are used anywhere in the text. But they must be put in quotation marks as the reader doesn't know who said these words. Additionally, not adding these symbols can be seen as plagiarism. These quotes should be followed with the name of who said it to clarify to the reader why this quote is important to be added. Phrases like “He said” or “She stated” are commonly used to do this.
The Factsheet Paragraph:
The police in this municipality received a call at 3:45 p.m. yesterday afternoon. A woman shouted at the sergeant who answered the telephone. She said: "My son's been beaten. His teacher whipped him this afternoon, and he's all red where she paddled him. Can teachers do that? That's assault and battery, and I want her arrested." Two police officers were sent to the home. They questioned the boy, who is 9 years old. At his mother's insistence, the police officers also inspected the boy's reported injuries. They reported: "We couldn't tell that the boy had been paddled. His fanny didn't look red to us, but we did notice that his pants legs were wet and muddy. As we talked, it became obvious that the boy was lying. He finally admitted that he had stopped to play on the way home from school, forgot the time and got home late. He told his mother that the teacher had spanked him and kept him after school. His mother was there with us and heard the whole story. She said she'd take off the situation, and we're quite certain that she will, as she was very embarrassed. In fact, we could hear her giving the kid a real paddling as we left—and a hard one."
Created lead:
“My son’s been beaten.”
Shouts a concerned Mother on the phone. A police officer on the other side listens to the mother as she is sharing her frustration on the matter.
“His teacher whipped him this afternoon, and he's all red where she paddled him.” The Mother says as she is getting more angry and frustrated. She continues, “Can teachers do that? That's assault and battery, and I want her arrested.”
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